I received my article back form my teacher with some improvements to change. I had to make it more exclusive for the audience to find it more appealing and I also had to include a comment on first impressions of Sammi and what it was like interviewing her.
As my article was already long enough I decided to add an extra column to the right of the double page spread which had some more exclusive information. The information was that it had been announced to the magazine before anyone else that Sammi is going on tour next year. I think this adds more appeal to the double page spread as fans will want to be the first to know about tour information.
I added a few sentences at the beginning of my article describing how Sammi walked in and what she looked like. This showed my first impressions of her and will make the readers feel as though they are there with me.
Finally I need the article with a few short sentences saying how nice it was to interview Sammi and what a laugh she is, I then said that fans could find out more about the new album by visiting the website, this promotes the website and will appeal to fans as they will want to know all the information they can.
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