Improvements on Preliminary Task

I recently got my preliminary task back including my school magazine cover and contents page with improvements. These were the improvements I was given:

• Consider the impact of the masthead
• Anchorage text needs to really stand out
• Ensure space isn't wasted
• Link page numbers to additional pictures in contents page

These are elements of my magazine that I meed to focus on and improve for when I create my music magazine. So in the creation of my music magazine I will ensure that the masthead strongly stands out well to create a clear brand identity by using bold fonts. I will also use bold fonts in my anchorage text and position it in a way to make it stand out more with the use a bolder colour. Also I will fill all clear space with conventions. Finally in the contents page I will make sure when featuring other images that it is clear what stories and page numbers they link to.